A loooong work for done this.
Finally i'm not very satisfied of it, i think that Riguel, the boy on the first plan of the 3rd panel break the dynamism. I'll work on it again.
EDIT: I've change the wrong version of Riguel that desappointed me.
All the action and damage merged into two panels are very confusing me. I find that without hardened contour black lines, and depth toning, and boundary boxes with negative white space between, I get lost very easily in comic panels (which is sad considering I profess to be one)
Exactly what is going on at this point in the series?
nice job!
Bon je me tais.
Exactly what is going on at this point in the series?
i know what u mean cause i have to draw my first pages that ive done again and ugh its annoying but nessisa.... nessicar..... its needed....